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Prose Critique #17
Clear away clutter to achieve a clearer effect
May 11
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Prose Critique #16
Resist the urge to explain (R.U.E.)
May 4
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Prose Critique #15
Use modifiers sparingly
Apr 20
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Prose Critique: Dustborn
Use active verbs and strong adjectives to balance description and pacing
Feb 24
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Prose Critique: Kindling
Narrow your details while establishing your storyworld
Feb 17
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Prose Critique #14
Use word order to create clear imagery
Feb 7
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Prose Critique #13
Use precise language to invoke imagery instantly
Nov 18, 2023
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Prose Critique #12
Break up dialog with narration that reveals motivations
Nov 3, 2023
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Prose Critique #11
Use description to draw out suspenseful moments
Oct 21, 2023
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Let me critique your prose on my Substack
Oct 14, 2023
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Prose Critique #10
Use dialog and body language to realistically convey stress
Oct 13, 2023
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Prose Critique #9
Use descriptions of the setting to reveal the narrator's attitude
Sep 16, 2023
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