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Parker, thank you so incredibly much for this AMAZING and super encouraging feedback!! This means a LOT to me.

I wrote In Your Dreams more than a decade ago, and a few years ago I realized that there was a more captivating way to start the story. This scene here came to mind, and I wrote it, but I never felt it was QUITE right yet--like something small is still off to me.

Reading your feedback feels SUPER encouraging and, reading my words here, I gained a fresh perspective that lets me really see and appreciate the scene again. Thank you so incredibly much for your amazing feedback! I love those ideas and I look forward to exploring them! Thank you so much for the warm words too - it's all so super encouraging! :) :D

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I'm so glad the notes were helpful. Thank you for sharing your work! I hope you feel inspired to continue with this story.

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