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Thank you for sharing your process! It was so helpful to see your revision. I love the tension in this scene!

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Thanks again for having me for this feature, Parker! Always fun to share process work :)

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Loved this book

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Thank you both for sharing! I love the thoughts behind the edits; they encourage me because I apply a similar rationale to my editing in terms of level of detail, depth of thought/analysis, sensitivity to rhythm re: sentence length and content volume, and consideration of redundancy/repetition. It was very encouraging to see those familiar lines of thinking—especially as I am almost done editing (again) a book I have been editing since I wrote it in 2006-2007. Thank you both again for sharing!! Great edits!

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