Thanks again for the critique, Parker. I appreciate the insights. This is a WIP, so when I get to this point of the story, I'll be taking your suggestions into account.
Your 100 word challenge during January - which this is from - was fun, and I hope you run another challenge soon.
I really enjoy these, they're always so enlightening and useful. Thank you!
Thanks again for the critique, Parker. I appreciate the insights. This is a WIP, so when I get to this point of the story, I'll be taking your suggestions into account.
Your 100 word challenge during January - which this is from - was fun, and I hope you run another challenge soon.
Oh, and Donna is holding Bea's hand. Lol