The Writer's Attic

The Writer's Attic

Share this post

The Writer's Attic
The Writer's Attic
Prose Critique #20

Prose Critique #20

Use a character's past as a lens for the present

Apr 30, 2025
∙ Paid
1

Share this post

The Writer's Attic
The Writer's Attic
Prose Critique #20
Share

Today’s Prose Critique is a bonus post just for paid subscribers!

Welcome to Prose Critique, in which I critique an excerpt for grammar and style. Style is subjective, so my notes won’t resonate with everyone, but I hope that they’ll help writers learn how to focus their writing to convey meaning in the boldest, clearest, most interesting way possible.

In this excerpt, a student named Isabel gets a rare job opportunity from her law professor. My notes mostly focus on weaving in hints about Isabel’s past so that we understand her reaction to her sudden stroke of good luck.

This post is for paid subscribers

Already a paid subscriber? Sign in
© 2025 Parker Peevyhouse
Privacy ∙ Terms ∙ Collection notice
Start writingGet the app
Substack is the home for great culture

Share